It has become very common for the newspaper and news channels to broadcast the personal life of celebrities such as Bollywood actor and actress, Sports personalities, Politicians, etc. The young generation is more interest to know each and everything about their favorite celebrities. It motives them to follow their footsteps and persuade them to achieve their dreams but there should be regulations to control the privacy breach. In the following essay, I will discuss some of the reasons why publicizing personal information can create an environment of insecurity & moment of embarrassment along with few positives that can take place in the society if the information is circulated under the regularity norms.
Let us being by looking at the positive side, One of the main positives is that fans just follow the footsteps of their favorite stars and try to do the same in real life. Take "Swach Bharat Abhiyan" as an example, when the Indian prime minister took the broom to clean the dirt on the roads. every single follower of his took the initiative to keep the area clean and broom the neighborhood if required. Another positive is that it inspires young adults to do something beneficial for health as well. To instance, Indian cricketer Rahul Dravid promotes the ban on Tobacco products as it creates serious health issues like lung cancer so millions of his followers do not use or promote cigarette, pan masala, etc.
On the other hand, there are few serious negatives which are considered as a shameful act of the news reports. There are many cases registered when media persons captured the inappropriate picture of female celebrities and print in the news. To illustrate, Tennis star Sania Mirza is one of the worlds best player but there are many moments when media personals took her embarrassing photos and publish in the newspapers just to increase the TRP of their channel. it created a sense of insecurity for her and it diverted her focus form the game so there should be rules and regulations for the news channels to follow all the time and the government should take strict action against the channels if do not work under the regulations or policies.
All things considered, the pros of motivating people to do good deeds can not overcome the negatives of the breach of personal space, it put peoples lives at the stack and creates a feeling of harassment. in my opinion, the government should introduce some strict code of conduct and regulation for the newspaper agencies and news channels and provide support to celebrities to focus on their work.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, well, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2165.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 433.0 315.596192385 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77337913088 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547344110855 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 678.6 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.2619045706 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.333333333 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8666666667 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111267453463 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0341266893033 0.084324248473 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362658964953 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.074650865513 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509480113 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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