Not so many people use a bicycle although it has many benefits. Why? How to encourage people to use bicycles as a main transport?
Although many positive effects on society, bicycle have been not receiving a great deal of citizens’ attention. Personally, I think this tendency could be attributed to two main reasons and that this is a trend that should be changed.
There are two main grounds why individuals have not cycled although it is beneficial for their health. First, the predominant factor of this is bicycles’ time and place limit. Riding bikes has taken people’s physical strength and many hours traveling on a long-distance route or delivery heavy goods to many places, affecting on labor productivity and wasting times. Second, another cause of this is that bicycle is a personal transport. Riding bikes has been not suitable for families or groups when they have to go out together and have some conversations during their trips; therefore, they choose bigger vehicles instead of bicycles.
However, some viable measures should be taken by government to tackle such problems. First, city leaders could build more lanes only for cyclists to travel faster. Serving only who riding bikes would reduce the number of traffic jams and avoid smog from other vehicles; therefore, more people could choose bicycle as their primary means of transport. Second, launching campaigns to raise citizens’ awareness of the harmful effects of motorbikes or cars on the environment and the Earth could be also a potential way to solve this problem. For instance, by doing this in schools or media, it would educate the public about bikes’ benefits and encourage them to cycle.
In conclusion, some reasons why humans do not often use bicycles can be identified, and simple measures should be adopted to inspire them to cycling more frequently.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 427, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'personal transport'.
Suggestion: personal transport
...nother cause of this is that bicycle is a personal transport. Riding bikes has been not suitable for...
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Line 5, column 307, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to bicycle'
Suggestion: to bicycle
...es; therefore, more people could choose bicycle as their primary means of transport. Se...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, for instance, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29963898917 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80909576929 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617328519856 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5618563296 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.923076923 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20856854048 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692499851123 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601598927051 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12375740576 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402536593033 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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