Undoubtly, in today’s materialistic world people have communication gap because of their hectic schedules so People browse internet for socializing with friends instead of being face to face. While i believe that using internet is big part of life nowadays but it is difficult to say that this is a positive trend.
On the one hand, using internet is an integral part of life jn today’s fast paced world as most of the things are done via internet by every age group of people due to technical advancements. To exemplify, in these days people have been using internet for numerous activities such as studying, booking train tickets online, reading e- books, paying bills, checking bank accounts snd so on. So, from the point of view of connecting online, for earning more and more money both genders are working now even they do not have some time to spend with their children that ruins their strong bonding with parents. Therefore, because of having busy schedules they talk with friends and relatives on phones and via facebook, whatsApp, Instagram mediums. Secondly, if online sources will be using by the people then they can save their precious time. Meanwhile, the saved time could be used for other important activities rather than wasting it. Finally, sharing information online is most convenient way as it is easy to send messages and make calls in case of emergency that improves the communication process among people. Also, many socisl websites are being used by people in these days and people make new connections that bring them closest to each other. Most importantly, To get an employment, one should have wide network of people as they can get job through others reference. That is why people choose to communicate online as it saves money, time and provide fast and convenient services.
On the other hand, i also support that today people do not interact face to face with each other. First of all, both women and men are working so due to lack of time they can not go anywhere specially to meet somebody like their relatives or friends. Therefore, interacting face to face is less as compared to make conversations on phone call. Besides this, people requires time from their businesses to meet others physically that they do not have. As a result, in spite of having enough money to meet needs they are being crave to earn more money. Additionally, Technology is taking place kn every field if life now and innovative things have been used by people on daily basis.consewuently, people do not even think about going anywhere because they have different others ways of communication in these days without consuming more time. Last but not least, meeting face to face not only enhance relationships but also gives true message that people want to send to another person. To. Explain more, while talking on phone people can not see the facial expressions of other people. However, communicating in front of each other enhances clarity and boost relationships.
To conclude, although internet is best source of information and provides different means to communicate with others yet i think that face to face conversations are beneficial and increase affaction among people as well as helps in making long lasting relationships.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, while, i think, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 41.998997996 174% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2719.0 1615.20841683 168% => OK
No of words: 543.0 315.596192385 172% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0073664825 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82725184711 4.20363070211 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71069165308 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 281.0 176.041082164 160% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517495395948 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 855.0 506.74238477 169% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.1156576353 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.590909091 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6818181818 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.54545454545 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257159298333 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077569916816 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607258407888 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165183259064 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298698451508 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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