Nowadays, all new town planning should include public parks, shopping malls and sports facilities. Do you agree or disagree?
Over the recent years, towns are capable to delegate all services such as public parks, shopping malls, and sports facilities. However, the world is renovated compared to the past. Hence, these all are the essential features should be there in a new building of town.
To begin with, I completely agree with this consequence, owing to that the modern technology well developed more at contemporary. Firstly, making a team to plan all the factors to introduce a new town or city. Subsequently, all decisions and opinions should be equalized and finally take a good decision to achieve a notion. Then, divided the members in accordingly and make a unity of each other. Perhaps, these team members should have the qualities such as attitude, creativity and good knowledge. Secondly, one member should be lead to everyone in the group unless, all others splits to go as riots and making hassles among the public. However, the city became as the culprits house.
Evidently, public parks are necessary to keep in town because the younger children meet their friends inside the park for study as well as the rejuvenation purposes. Moreover, in case of shopping malls plays a very important role into it. Most of the people their free time will spend at shopping malls for buying different kinds of things such as clothes, household materials, cosmetics, sandals and toys etc. Furthermore, in terms of sports facilities like gym or playground is extremely being a part of it. Thus, all the adults are very fascinated to attend the gym activities and exercise which are provided them owing to the build up and fosters the body as fit for everything. Hence, this is un trivial one. As an illustration, in our hometown the facilities are available that are shopping malls, jewellery shops, gym, band, dance, music learning and play ground as well.
In conclusion, If we plan to create a new town, which must include shopping mall, parks, gym and sports facilities. However, if one is neglected from this, people cannot accept that this is a city because technology has tremendously changed contrastingly at past.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 533, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'leaded', 'led'?
Suggestion: leaded; led
...owledge. Secondly, one member should be lead to everyone in the group unless, all ot...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, then, thus, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1760.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01424501425 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72105874257 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592592592593 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6508078791 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6315789474 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4736842105 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.73684210526 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30597046953 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825814192151 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104531306721 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198618780239 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0773268745118 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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