In this globalization era, animals are having to suffer due to some experiments for medicine purposes as well as varied kind of products.Therefore,some folks think that these experiments should be prohibited because it gives the harashment to them but according to the mentality of some masses this scrutinizing is very obligatory to search out innovative things.This essay will analyze on both the view points with my own opinion.
To begin with, it can be clearly seen in this modern era how the people have to face number of diseases.Hence, the demand of high quality medicines is escalating day by day to cure the noxious ailments because the human life is very precious to maintain the system of whole world.Therefore, the experiments on animals have utmost good benefits because we get to know that this medicine is not harmful for humans.In fact , the amendments are feasible to make the better life of humans with the help of these experiments.
On the flip side, animals experiments are not the right way to develop new medicines .Firstly,because it becomes the main reason of their death due to high dose of medicine because sometime animals cannot accept the excessive pain of chemical poisoning. Secondly, these experiments need a huge amount of money for the fulfillment of this process because this procedure takes a long period of time to search out new things as well as animals need a care during this period.
To conclude, we should not irritate the animals and the experiments should be banned for the long life of creatures and companies should try to use alternative method to produce medicines
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in fact, kind of, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1353.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04850746269 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08724812858 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570895522388 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 20.2975951904 261% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 128.481282684 49.4020404114 260% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 270.6 106.682146367 254% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.6 20.7667163134 258% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 24.8 7.06120827912 351% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3044229002 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.175206562557 0.084324248473 208% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540423258383 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192117823197 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472728181167 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.2 13.0946893788 223% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 17.68 50.2224549098 35% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.0 11.3001002004 212% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.9 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 32.0 9.78957915832 327% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.2 10.1190380762 229% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 24.0 10.7795591182 223% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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