Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favour of them because of their benefits to humanity.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is remarkable that these days, more and more animal experimentation has been used in medical research and the safety tests for new products. While some people believe that animals testing is morally wrong and thus should be abolished, others say it is beneficial to humans.
On the one hand, there are strong arguments against animal testing. First, humans have no right to cause pain or trauma to animals. It could be extremely cruel to watch a rat hopelessly suffering the pain in the laboratory for the search of the new drug for humans. In other words, just because humans would not experiment on their peers will never able to justify the suffering caused on animals. Second, it would be utterly pointless to force animals to eat a product that humans are unsure about its quality. These people believe that there must be other alternative methods to test the safety of a product.
On the other hand, supporters of the use of animals in medical research believe that it is justifiable if a certain amount of pain on a particular animal would allow for the invention of medicines that save hundreds human lives. They also think that if people who against these tests are suffering serious health problems and in desperate need for the cure, they might have to ponder over having those tests on animals, which had resulted in the appropriate treatment for their illness.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that it is not necessary to have animals experiment for the release of certain products, yet it is morally accepted as long as animals are used for the research of vital medical treatment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, so, thus, while, in conclusion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1332.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86131386861 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53269946353 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536496350365 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.4986393722 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.090909091 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9090909091 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.18181818182 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.376850559787 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144934025461 0.084324248473 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0902833261884 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243530476159 0.151304729494 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0905540219477 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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