Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favour of them because of their benefits to humanity.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Moving towards the 21st century, a large number of people are nowadays expressing a deeply growing concern about science and technonlogy. In fact, there are some who hold firmly to their belief that the experiments using animals should be abolished because of its humanity.However, other agree with opposite view given that these experiments can boost human development. Therefore, some arguments both for and against this issue will be addressed in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, there are two major points for people to defend the former view. First of all, it is a well-documented fact that doing an experiments on animals are the crime against benevolence. The most obvious example to prove is that recently, more and more animal protection organization have been criticizing the gorvement for these unkind actions. Furthermore, there is no doubt that animal testing violate animals rights. Not only the experimental animals endure toxic chemicals of untested medicines, but also they have to suffer from pain after the trial. That is why these experiments should be banned eternally.
On the other hand, there are two main pieces of evidence for other people to support the latter argument . . First and foremost, it is commonly accepted that if animal’s experiments are excuted, it can reduce the fatal ratio of human. A clear example being found to prove is that the trial of medicines using animals are extremely successful without the sacrification of human. They do not have to take part in some dangerous experiments which can steal their life easily. In addition to this, testing medicines on animals is effortless and cheap. For instance,in the experiments upon human, scientists and gorvement must prepare a lot of progress and finance. In the contrast, they do not have to spend any money on the trial of animals because the tested creatures are only white mice or monkeys which are widely available in the nature.
All things considered, it is my strong belief that the experiments on animals are cruel and terrible and it should be eliminated. Accordingly, I strongly recommend the governments should enhance people’s awareness in terms of the animals because they deserve to be treated with respect. If this recommendation is carried out, the comprehensive development of our future society will be ensured.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 34, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
Moving towards the 21st century, a large number of people are nowadays expressing a deeply...
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Line 1, column 274, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...ld be abolished because of its humanity.However, other agree with opposite view given t...
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Line 2, column 135, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an experiment' or simply 'experiments'?
Suggestion: an experiment; experiments
...it is a well-documented fact that doing an experiments on animals are the crime against benevo...
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Line 3, column 106, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...er people to support the latter argument . . First and foremost, it is commonly a...
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Line 3, column 108, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...people to support the latter argument . . First and foremost, it is commonly acce...
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Line 3, column 562, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , in
...ls is effortless and cheap. For instance,in the experiments upon human, scientists ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, in fact, no doubt, first of all, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1976.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25531914894 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90458360494 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561170212766 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 631.8 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4780300179 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7894736842 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.94736842105 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.385485577699 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112558072092 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657963847826 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231685908591 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0245517623324 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 34, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
Moving towards the 21st century, a large number of people are nowadays expressing a deeply...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 274, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...ld be abolished because of its humanity.However, other agree with opposite view given t...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 135, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an experiment' or simply 'experiments'?
Suggestion: an experiment; experiments
...it is a well-documented fact that doing an experiments on animals are the crime against benevo...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 106, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...er people to support the latter argument . . First and foremost, it is commonly a...
^^
Line 3, column 108, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...people to support the latter argument . . First and foremost, it is commonly acce...
^^
Line 3, column 562, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , in
...ls is effortless and cheap. For instance,in the experiments upon human, scientists ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, in fact, no doubt, first of all, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1976.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25531914894 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90458360494 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561170212766 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 631.8 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4780300179 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7894736842 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.94736842105 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.385485577699 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112558072092 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657963847826 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231685908591 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0245517623324 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.