“Nowadays, anyone who can’t speak English and is incapable of using the Internet is regarded as almost illiterate”. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Most people in today’s generation are relying on the Internet to do a lot of different tasks. In fact, many information from Internet is posted in English. Therefore, people are thought by some to be nearly illiterate if they can not speak English or use the Internet. However, in my opinion, while I believe that such sites are mainly beneficial to the individual, I agree that people who do not use them should not be considered as illiterate.
With regards to individuals, the impact that Internet and English has had on each person has clear advantages. English is a commonly-used language, along with the Internet, can bring people together as they easily meet and participate in discussions with anyone outside of their immediate circle or community. Knowing how to use English may open up more opportunities like pushing the career forward. Also, it is better and easier for you to get access to knowledge as well as have a more convenient life if you are able to use the Internet.
On the other hand, supposing that they have a lot of benefits for people, there are still many who are not interested in English and Internet and they are regarded as illiterate. Illiteracy is definited as a lack of ability to read and write at all. Actually, we do not use illiterate to refer to how well or badly someone knows a foreign language but to talk about their competence in the language. For example, a person who can read and write Japanese is not usually considered illiterate, whatever country they are in. Also, despite the popularity of English in the world, it has no official status, so not everyone will have to learn English. . The same situation comes to the Internet as many people do not pay attention to this technological advantage. Each person has their individual conditions, jobs or hobbies. If you work in National Intelligence Agency, you of course are not allowed to use some social networking sites which are related to the Internet. Many people do not use the Internet because they do not like but not to know how to use it. English and the Internet are just means of Technology 4.0, they are not compulsories but they can make our lives more comfortable and convenient.
To sum up, whether you choose to learn and use English, whether you use the Internet or not, it all depends on you.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, in fact, of course, as well as, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1923.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 404.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7599009901 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76431194245 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502475247525 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 639.9 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9143954856 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.210526316 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2631578947 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.52631578947 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330295140681 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.095612498257 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519500923289 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204231845533 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359448548173 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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