Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievements and this sets a bad example to the young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Entertainment exam Main source by which people enjoy most and this art available has a actors. By using to it they attracts to more persons. In this trend superstars are more popular for their looks and richness than to their accomplishments which are providing a worst instance for youngster. I partially agree with this statement and my partia agreement agreement will be articulated in collector in following paragraph Prior to reaching conclusion.
It is noteworthy to mention that celebraties have glamorous and wealth. however, it can leave negative effect on youngones due to some reasons. The most prevalent factor behind this is that in front of the screen of television or cinema they show as a role model for young people but in a back side of screen they do illegal activities which are not good for the blind fans. For example, when CBI was investigating of Sushant's death case. CBI released Karan Johar a famous film star is doing a business of drugs when you knew about it they felt that they were wrong. Therefore, it is enough to say that show off does not set an example for anybody.
Paradoxically, there are some celebrities who are famous for their achievement due to they earned huge fans because of some reasons. The worth mentioning factor for this is that they became for their work. For instance, salman khan attempted various method to reach at high success in his life on which he has arrived now. That is why how na people inspired from him. Hence, there is no need to say more there are some film stars available who set good example for their followers.
In conclusion, after throwing light on partially agree, From my perspective, some famous superstars misleading their fans by acting. However, several filmstars set a good example by doing hard work.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 25, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Main) must be used with a third-person verb: 'sources'.
Suggestion: sources
Entertainment exam Main source by which people enjoy most and this art...
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Line 1, column 86, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...e enjoy most and this art available has a actors. By using to it they attracts to...
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Line 1, column 86, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a actor' or simply 'actors'?
Suggestion: a actor; actors
...e enjoy most and this art available has a actors. By using to it they attracts to more p...
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Line 1, column 116, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'attract'
Suggestion: attract
...lable has a actors. By using to it they attracts to more persons. In this trend supersta...
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Line 1, column 263, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...eir accomplishments which are providing a worst instance for youngster. I partial...
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Line 1, column 347, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: agreement
...agree with this statement and my partia agreement agreement will be articulated in collector in fol...
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Line 3, column 74, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
... celebraties have glamorous and wealth. however, it can leave negative effect on youngo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, look, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1488.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86274509804 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6706285448 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9194996389 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5294117647 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05882352941 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.377419928501 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105961736627 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795526329527 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213951929872 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615505197741 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.