Nowadays, children spend too much time watching TV and playing computer games. Some people believe this has negative effects on children’s mental abilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that in today’s modern life, children spend too much their leisure time in video games and TV programs which lead to detriment of their mental health. In my opinion, I completely disagree with this idea and believe that there are both advantages and disadvantages of such a view.
There are two main reasons why televisions and computer games can have a negative impact on many youngsters these days. Firstly, it is unquestionable that there are some obscence contents on certain films or electronic games, such as violent and erotic scences, which can trigger the imagination and curiosity of children. For this reason, this might have a harmful influence on infants’ minds who are sensitive to such informations. Another important reason is that game-addicted children not only lead a sedentary lifestyle but also lose their communicative skills. For instance, if these children prefer joining team sports to keeping their eyes glued to screens, they can stand a good chance of establishing the connections with others in real life. Therefore, Physical activitiy is a significant factor which helps their brain develop.
However, TV shows and video games play an essential role in brainpower of children. One reason is that the youth can avail their self of the opportunity to broaden their knowledge through new technologies. For example, Discovery Channel is one of the most well-known TV programs which widen children’s horizon about unknown natural habitats and importance of preserving Endangered species. Furthermore, a number of games such as Brain Yoga and Chess online can make a contribution to improve kids’ intelligence.
In conclusion, I personally agree that TV channels and electronic games have both beneficial and detrimental effects on psychological development of youngsters.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41901408451 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04520877264 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637323943662 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.296934521 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.384615385 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6153846154 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235329884178 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771030329594 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599953030732 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145796746493 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541266062745 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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