There are numerous people who still insist on the speculation that Earth is one of the permanent objects which would remain stable for ever. They have expressed that although time passes and new generations come, new things appear etc, Earth by retaining its structure, chemical compounds, atmosphere and surface won't alter.
Contrary to popular belief, investigations have proved the fact that all the planets especially Earth that is home of animal kingdom are constantly changing.
Global warming is one of the noticeable changes in the world tempertures that has arisen mainly from the increased amount of greenhouse gases which can trap the heat received from the sun that otherwise would escape from the Earth. Carbon dioxide emissions from burning fossil fuels or from extreme deforestation and even the sudden rise in methene caused by agriculture and animal husbandry can beget such a huge and harmful impact on the atmosphere.
Geologist have fully perceived that Earth's surface is not an exception and has been witness to some alterations in itself compared with twentieth century. Winds, gravity, glaciers, waters and above all climate change are known as the important environmental factors. For instance, erosion of rocks occurs mostly in the wake of perennial winds and water movement.
Unnumbered mines have been discovered ever all over the world, but unfortunately , they haven't been exploited accurately and legally and annual consumption of mineral extracted from the ground is soaring which indicates humans are disrupting their natural system.
In conclusion, the passage of time and environmental factors are automatically changing the planets which could be good or bad, but in principle, the only possible way for human being is to slow it down by reducing the amount of greenhouse gases or by not abusing the mines in order to preserve our Earth!
- Some suggest that young people should take a job for a few years between school and university. Discuss what the advantages and disadvantages might be for people who do this. 79
- Nowadays environmental problems are too big to be managed by individual persons or individual countries. In other words, it is an international problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 11
- Today many young people are moving from rural areas to cities. Why is this. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.? 95
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, still, then, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39393939394 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73954601756 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653198653199 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.2299774249 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 160.2 106.682146367 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.7 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0272636179333 0.244688304435 11% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0108302753107 0.084324248473 13% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0179822718121 0.0667982634062 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0142819255009 0.151304729494 9% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.021213485105 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => It means the essay is relatively harder to read.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.29 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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