Nowadays genetically modified food is widespread all over the world. While proponents of GM crops ensure that these foods are safe for human consumption and help to increase food supplies, others argue that their effects on health have not been studied long enough. Describe pros and cons of genetically modified foods
It is true that, genetically modified food excessively consumed all over the world .While some think that there were not enough research and studies have been done in this field , I side with those who argue that genetically engineered food can bring a lot of benefits .
There are various reasons why it might be considered detrimental. Health is a major concern when discussing modified food. Genetically modified organisms can cause health problems. For instance, animal studies shown that genetically engineered food is causing organ damage, immune system disorders, accelerated aging, and infertilities. Furthermore, transgenic food has reduced the biodiversity of ecosystem. The chemicals that are within the modified organisms are harming insects, marine life, and amphibians.
In spite of these arguments, I believe that genetically modified organisms can make farming easier, seeds that are genetically modified will be able to grow in soils that would normally be impossible. Also, because of their fast expansion they can be grown at the same place therefore, clearing the land for farming is not necessary. Moreover, genetically modified food resistant to insects. More crops survive which results in a higher yield for farmers. Due to the fact that we use less pesticides ,insecticides, herbicides soil pollution and groundwater pollution can be prevented.
In conclusion, Despite the popularity of genetically modified food , some believe that this area is not fully understood .However ,I personally believe that food that is genetically modified highly useful.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, in spite of, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 41.998997996 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1343.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64285714286 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00760902094 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638655462185 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.6934440464 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.307692308 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3076923077 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31813460724 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111615665748 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0861103044081 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205188366097 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591758640174 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.