Nowadays many city big cities become overcrowded from many reasons. Firstly, big cities have many job, technology is developing, have many conditions for living and working so many people from other place come and live in these cities. But one city has too many people will become uncomfortable, noise, pollution,.. If we want to prevent it, i think we need to decrease the population and develop other cities, because if we develop all cities, people will go and live in many cities and not live in one.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: gaurav-anand
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 94, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun job seems to be countable; consider using: 'many jobs'.
Suggestion: many jobs
... many reasons. Firstly, big cities have many job, technology is developing, have many co...
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Line 1, column 313, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...l become uncomfortable, noise, pollution,.. If we want to prevent it, i think we n...
^^
Line 1, column 314, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
... become uncomfortable, noise, pollution,.. If we want to prevent it, i think we ne...
^^
Line 1, column 343, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... pollution,.. If we want to prevent it, i think we need to decrease the populatio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, so, as to, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 41.998997996 17% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 420.0 1615.20841683 26% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 87.0 315.596192385 28% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8275862069 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.05407580998 4.20363070211 73% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56339878753 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 56.0 176.041082164 32% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64367816092 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 141.3 506.74238477 28% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9451366983 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.75 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216783844494 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164207360841 0.084324248473 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0987694262349 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216783844494 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 17.0 78.4519038076 22% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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