conclusively, the undiable fact, that technolgy has been an imperative developer of thiriving society. In this modern era, as a result human activity has evolved been being more efficiently and effectively. There are numerous meetings and training which occouring by online mode that being famous and popular, thus, people prefer to choose online networking as cut down of bugdet of transportation of individuals, families, and commercial as well as traveling place to another. Online networking absolutely beneficial rather than other, albeit some demerits associeted with it, hence less outweigh its virtues.
interconnection among people has whereby been easily with regard to the profoundly of growth communication techology which is online interaction. This phenomenon surely bring many interest. First and foremost is, considerably, social networking websites which a great deal of meetings and training could be handled in far away distance. Thus, people be able to talk with other even penetrating in overseas which it is provide oppurtunities to spend more money to other, develop social, personal, group, even commercial bonding. To illustrate, it is numerous offering from business from overseas that usually more benefical rather than nearest company that provided. People, comprehensively choose the afforable and convenient one as a solution and achieve more income. Some peers also as a student from tutor of other country, people in tendency of working get helped from online meeting, furthermore, that they spend time to arrange other neccesity such as families.
Hence, numerous demerits follow behind that being obstacle. When online meeting occuring, hard to imagine if folks did not have agreement in a discuss of company planing, there is no realistic mimic and people. Activity in sureal it may be degradation of people communication, regardless its virtues. Admittedly, sophisticated instrument such as online mode may help people to do some activities, however people are limited by place and time and less spend time to their familiy. In addition, spending time as well as sitting front of computer, continously, may cause several fatal ailements -- backpain, osteporosis, even major disorder.
To conclude. Meeting and studying in far distace method has few drawbacks, nevertheless the virtues more outweigh its dark side of online networking.
- some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 56
- The government should reduce the amount of money spent on local environmental problems and instead increase funding into urgent and more threatening issues such as global warming To what extent do you agree 70
- Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this can not be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 78
- Some people think success in life comes from hard work and determination. Other think money and appearance are more important.Disscuss both sides and give your opinion. 84
- Some modern artist receive huge sums of money for the things they create while others struggle to survive Governments should take steps to resolve this unfair situation To what extent do you agree or disagree 90
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Conclusively
conclusively, the undiable fact, that technolgy has ...
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Line 1, column 52, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y, the undiable fact, that technolgy has been an imperative developer of thirivin...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Interconnection
...it, hence less outweigh its virtues. interconnection among people has whereby been easily wi...
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Line 3, column 176, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun interest seems to be countable; consider using: 'many interests'.
Suggestion: many interests
...teraction. This phenomenon surely bring many interest. First and foremost is, considerably, s...
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Line 3, column 419, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'provided'.
Suggestion: provided
...ven penetrating in overseas which it is provide oppurtunities to spend more money to ot...
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Line 3, column 631, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'than the nearest'.
Suggestion: than the nearest
...seas that usually more benefical rather than nearest company that provided. People, comprehe...
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Line 5, column 142, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...gine if folks did not have agreement in a discuss of company planing, there is no realist...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, thus, well, in addition, such as, as a result, as well as, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2020.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.62674094708 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98413500506 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601671309192 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 645.3 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.84644697 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.823529412 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1176470588 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35294117647 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125021096525 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0373102721058 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377812924488 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0829923701 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0213926031493 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.18 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 78.4519038076 159% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.