It undeniable fact that an economic thirving is an integral part of factors that lead to be an affluent nation. Several government believe that is the vital goal, however, some people think others progress beside economic growth as worth as vital for a country.
First of all, a developing country, concusively, can be seen by how they enrich their citizens, In the other word, the higher economic a nation the higher percentage to be developing country. For example, a nation with highly standard salary give more oppurtinity for their people to be well-being and afford of well-standard of life. However, the economic growth is not the only goal to prospherous people to be happy. According to research, happier country is not depend on their economic growth, but the other part also contribute.
In the other hand, there are two major contributor to reach affluent country. Firstly, developing moral value of the nations is also vital factorin order to maintain their sustain ability to prevent a gulf among people. For salient example, Sweden, the less criminal rate is caused by education of moral value in fundamental system of education. In addition, Preparing the military instruments also very imporant to prevent chaos inside the nations.
To sum up, economic increase is not always the first and foremost condition to enrich people to good and be well-being, however the other factor also equally vital as well as economic growth. I believe to reach prospherity and to be affluent country that need a balance among progress of nations.
- The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. 56
- The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. the table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and ma 86
- Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead.To what extent do yo u agree with this statement? 78
- Children are facing more pressures nowadays from academic, social, and commercial prespective.What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce there pressures ? 73
- The diagram below shows how geothemal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 74
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 113, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun government seems to be countable; consider using: 'Several governments'.
Suggestion: Several governments
...ors that lead to be an affluent nation. Several government believe that is the vital goal, however...
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Line 2, column 466, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
...ing to research, happier country is not depend on their economic growth, but the other...
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Line 3, column 40, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'contributors'?
Suggestion: contributors
... In the other hand, there are two major contributor to reach affluent country. Firstly, dev...
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Line 3, column 40, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'contributor' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'contributors'.
Suggestion: contributors
... In the other hand, there are two major contributor to reach affluent country. Firstly, dev...
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Line 4, column 222, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...c growth. I believe to reach prospherity and to be affluent country that need a b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, well, for example, in addition, as well as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1298.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11023622047 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70055782868 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547244094488 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2706795133 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.166666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202798698931 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769696241137 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074653721622 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126524330418 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586856654255 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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