Children are facing more pressures nowadays from academic, social, and commercial prespective.
What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce there pressures ?
It is argued that the numerous pressures are suffering children presently. There are stressing from a wide range of aspects --- academic, social, and commercial. This essay, I intend to illustrate the causes of this issue and purpose some drastic remedies. Thus, I personally believe that children must be cover from form all of distrubing kind of pressures.
Firstly, I assume that academic pressure is one of the prime causes of children suffer. Misuse pedagogic placement is a part of integral factors of pressures that it makes children into a distress position. Nowadays, school not only place for gain knowlegde, but also for compete with peers that it leads to severe conditions of competiveness enviroment. For instance, ranking system are commonly used to publish who in highly prestige till lower-classes. Furthermore, in similar side, unconsidered parenting style also contributes of suffering children. Gaining fame in caste in society usually be despicable habbit of social lives. Parents set ideal model for their children which generate some kind of pressures for fill parent’s expectations. Thirdly, massively advertising movement be one of the drawback pressures to the children, feeble conditions and uncontrolable desires of child could be targeted by some of irresponsible people.
The way to reverse some of these problems, I would purpose to offer several solutions to solve these problems. I assure that virtues of knowledge must be associeted with good treatment to children in academic field, for instance, pedagogical-well-education with exposure to generate match education system. Moreover, parents should know their children capability of do something, they unable to catch all ideal that parents thought before, parents must low their expectation and give some oppurtunities to their child to grow their true potential. Furthermore, goverment must take a part of this issue with put limitation to advertising commercial and business also consider children condition with organize and put restriction into their commercial instrument such as websites.
By the way of conclusion, all of tremendous pressures could be happened by some circumstances such as unmatch education system, unconsidered parenting style with highly expectation to their children, and massively commercial sectors. I also provide some of drastic remedies that may could solve these problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rs that it leads to severe conditions of competiveness enviroment. For instance, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, may, moreover, so, third, thirdly, thus, well, for instance, kind of, such as, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2047.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.6703601108 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19945915311 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554016620499 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 639.9 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9901442638 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.722222222 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0555555556 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214669898948 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768381341135 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576686433808 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1442539361 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494926963871 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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