To increase public health measure, improving general current facilities are totally pivotal things that makes better health conditions in a society. Although, in other side, intend of some people its argue public health instrument contributes little portion. In following paragraphs, I will crack of points of views from both and including drastic remedies with it.
This is underlying argument by me, first and foremost, intensity public health not only by uplift expanding health facilities, but also several factors may considerably could attract people for increase their health condition. Hence, regulation pull people do some unhealthy way, for instance, there is no public facilities such as in park people could not exercise in public places that actually vital to gain public health. Be realistic, overall reason, people have no choice to choose public rather than the pay facilites ones.
In contrast , due to enchant people health life. I firmly, offer several possible drastic solutions for this issue. The government must allocate a great deal of money to generate virtues solutions such as increasing tax that may lead people for using public transportation and degrading emission usually emit it. In addition, paying attention to create private green house is one of solution to gain more clean air and associeted with decreased of pollution.
To sum up, I reaffirm my arguments about put more public sport facilities may gain public health and several measures that i assume could be done by authorities and people could build private health area.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, hence, if, may, so, for instance, in addition, in contrast, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1326.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39024390244 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.626347962 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650406504065 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9775945525 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.545454545 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3636363636 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.63636363636 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332676808249 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125565773854 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779433026427 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204200576536 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0740701640431 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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