Nowadays in many countries, people are following the latest fashion, hairstyles and so on.
Is it a positive or a negative development?
When it comes to fashion or new trends, people often mention a phenomenon of a group of people who excessively follow the most novel fashions ranging from outfits or hairstyles to home design. Therefore, this essay will discuss about some of the benefits and the drawbacks of this problem.
This trend may bring positive feelings to the wearers because they can blend in with society. Thus, people will be more confident and attractive due to being able to wear expensive and trendy outfits. Besides, it could develop the fashion industry. When more clothes are bought, the turnover of textile factories, clothes manufacturers will increase adequately. More importantly, it might solve the unemployment problem effectively, open more job opportunity for people who are jobless. It also helps with fashion designers and models earn more money. Last but not least, fashion not only could be a factor of beauty, but it also helps them to obtain the value of themselves in the crowd.
On the other hand, following the newest wrinkle can lead people to lose their personal identify. For instance, teenagers nowadays often would like to dress the same as their idols so that they will not have their own style, they cannot be unique, they are just the same as other people. Additionally, people will waste time and money to choose clothes and buy clothes. It would be a waste if people just buy, and does not care about the usage & suitability of the clothes.
In conclusion, people should harmonize the demand for following the latest trends and know what they really need.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, may, really, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1316.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00380228137 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52470574889 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604562737643 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1988650398 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7857142857 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211595034234 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665199226992 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056390736597 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124095961637 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253576073111 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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