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Nowadays many old cities are rebuilt and redesigned in order to make them look modern. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this practice.
In recent years, due to the population explosion of urban areas, it seems to be necessary to reconstruct and expand cities for the public interests in order to create a safer and better environment for residents. In this essay, I am going to examine both positive and negative impacts of this phenomenon.
On one hand, it is undeniable that cities will be beneficial through the reconstruction. To begin with, as many of cities were designed and build hundred years ago or even longer, the original facilities, such as sewage system, ventilation and so on, might not be longer meet the needs of mod...
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as many of cities were designed and build hundred years ago
as many of cities were designed and built hundred years ago
might not be longer meet the needs of modern societies
might no longer meet the needs of modern societies
Those architectures are surely vital valuable cultural heritages
Those architectures are surely the vital and valuable cultural heritages
are redesigned and renovate,
are redesigned and renovated,
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