Nowadays many parents believe that children’s usage of tablets or computers would be good for their future academic career. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such belief? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.
The shocking phenomenon of changing educational pattern recently comes to forefront. Some feel that modern techniques will not have an effect on future academic career. However, I agree with those who say that new techniques will help children’s in enlighten their bright future. In the following paragraphs, I will explore the rationale for both beliefs as well as proffer rationale for a viewpoint on this matter.
Regarding those who feel that new technique will not help; there exists valid reason the main justification is that with new technique there is less supervision of teachers. The Alaska reported just last week that students of Alaska who studied with the help of modern techniques they acquire bit less percentage as what they usually score.
Nevertheless, I can’t hold the opinion in good conscience because of the fact that individuals who used new techniques of study not only cater their study material at a short span of time; instead they come up with new automation in to the society for their betterment. an estimated 100,000 not only scored better grades, are now more mature. That same Harvard report mentioned that initiative of Austrian citizen proved that study through this new method foster process of children’s future academic career.
In sum, if everyone put a moratorium on a belief that only teaching through traditional methods helps student in the future academic career and pitches in, normal people like others and I can bring change. I hope that soon everyone understands how modern equipment like computers and modern tablets help the student.
- Some people believe it is better for children to grow up in the city while others say it is better to grow up in the countryside. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 73
- The chart below shows the different levels of post school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999. 73
- You recently visited a store to repair your computer, but they couldn’t fix it. Write a letter to the store manager and say– What was the problem with your computer?– What happened in the store?– What do you want them to do about it? 73
- Children usually want to play the same games and watch the same TV programs as their friends. Should parents allow it or not? Give your opinion and examples from your own experience. 73
- The bar chart shows the number of times per week (in 1000s), over five weeks, that three computer packages were downloaded from the internet.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: and
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Suggestion:
... percentage as what they usually score. Nevertheless, I can't hold the opin...
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Message: This phrase is redundant. Use simply 'because'.
Suggestion: because
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Suggestion: An
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, nevertheless, regarding, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1356.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27626459144 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77130773424 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607003891051 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.1566707017 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.272727273 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3636363636 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27272727273 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147934010317 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558153734464 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393682523033 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0890190711 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432674343754 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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