It is true that more and more folks these days set up their own businesses, trades or anything from which they can earn hardcash. In most of the cases, This might be because of the lesser opportunities for jobs as against to their level of education in the society and the flexibility provided by it. Hence, after discussing causes of this trend stated above, I will throw some light on the demerits of it.
First of all, this trend's celebrity has grown over the last few decades. Having said that, this is mainly because of the lack of job options at workplaces as many people nowadays holds a high level of degree than the type of job they are being provided with. And therefore, they becomes unwilling to do them and it creates a sense of annoyance. As a result, they look forward to be employed by themselves i.e. setting their own work to earn a happy amount of money. Second and the most obvious benefit of commencing your own work makes people not to be bound to time. In other words, these days more and more people gets stressed out and do not have adequate time to relish their lives because of lack of time. Hence, it provides them with the opportunity to have an ample time to spend by themselves. Finally, Owing to these reasons people prefer to have their own established works.
Although due to the reasons explained above, it is becoming increasingly popular,it also holds a downside. The very obvious disadvantage is the irregular income, for which everyone burns the midnight oil. However, working for some another company or or institute will definitely ensure that pay. In most of the worst scenarios, the business or the work which has been grounded, may not get succeeded and hence, nothing clear about monetary revenue. Secondly, it may affect people's habits as they may become slower which in comparison, might not be the case when you work for others. This in turn, may pose a problem of getting diseased such as by becoming vulnerable to obesity.
In conclusion, this spurring trend is mainly due to liberty people take and being deserved but not getting job which will match their level, are the main causes of being self employed. And, on the ugly side, irregular income and changed attitude and behavior towards work, are the main ones.
- Some people say that the environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals Others say that there are more important environmental problems Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 89
- Each year the crime rate increases What are the causes of crime and what could be done to prevent this rise in criminal activity 73
- Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals Others say that there are more important environmental problems Discuss both views and give your opinion 67
- Each year the crime rate increases What are the causes of crime and what could be done to prevent this rise in criminal activity Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 61
- Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters such as food clothes and entertainment is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes Other people believe that it is important 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 280, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'become'
Suggestion: become
...eing provided with. And therefore, they becomes unwilling to do them and it creates a s...
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Line 3, column 377, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to being'.
Suggestion: to being
...noyance. As a result, they look forward to be employed by themselves i.e. setting the...
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Line 5, column 81, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...ove, it is becoming increasingly popular,it also holds a downside. The very obvious...
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Line 5, column 248, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: or
...wever, working for some another company or or institute will definitely ensure that p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, hence, however, look, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, in other words, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1878.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 397.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73047858942 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4253748703 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551637279597 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5730072291 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8421052632 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8947368421 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.63157894737 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235249125342 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662565185703 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.079391325581 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141134025535 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426702673538 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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