Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization.
Why might this be the case?
What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
Recently, the phenomenon of finding a vacancy and its corresponding impacts have sparked a long-running dispute. In this regard, apart from various advantages of working for companies and organizations, some people prefer to be self-employed. In my view, miscellaneous factors contribute to select self-employment to do with psychological and financial aspects.
Obviously, loads of individuals couldn’t endure having a boss due to their personality. They like feeling freedom as they are doing their jobs rather than a restricted framework, for example, from 7:00 to 15:00 every day. Meanwhile, performing a regular routine work, under the supervision of managers, and following rules end up to dry creative minds of workers.
In addition, income and financial faces of jobs are other marked causes which compel individuals to ponder about establishing their own business. Through being an employee in a firm, they will pay a fair salary, although it may not be a fair salary in employees’ view, at the end of each month and if you are lucky, after say, 10 years, you are eligible to get a promotion. Unlike working for others as an employee, self-employers are of the opinion that their independence in terms of income is worth to choose self-employment.
On the other hand, we shouldn’t lose sight of drawbacks of being self-employed. While working for a company guarantee at least a regularly income every month, individuals who work for themselves may not gain any yields for a while even years. Moreover, bankruptcy is a dramatic side of self-employment. It is likely that under the circumstance of being bankrupt, they eventually lose everything they might have.
To sum up, despite compelling arguments on cons and pros of self-employment, I opt to support the idea that the merits of being self-employed far outweigh its downsides. To me, waking up early morning every day, obeying an obese executive manager and finally being an old, retired man after 30 years are a nightmare.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 90, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... its corresponding impacts have sparked a long-running dispute. In this regard, apart from var...
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Line 4, column 127, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('regularly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('income') instead of another adjective.
...orking for a company guarantee at least a regularly income every month, individuals who work for t...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, may, moreover, so, while, apart from, at least, for example, in addition, in my view, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1677.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22429906542 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25607023592 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638629283489 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.76152304609 273% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6378046258 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.8 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334759766122 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10180504619 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0848591780968 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179834207464 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0701491773705 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 90, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... its corresponding impacts have sparked a long-running dispute. In this regard, apart from var...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 127, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('regularly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('income') instead of another adjective.
...orking for a company guarantee at least a regularly income every month, individuals who work for t...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, may, moreover, so, while, apart from, at least, for example, in addition, in my view, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1677.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22429906542 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25607023592 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638629283489 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.76152304609 273% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6378046258 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.8 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334759766122 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10180504619 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0848591780968 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179834207464 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0701491773705 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.