It is true that, in this contemporary era, opening new business are being done by youngsters at an unprecedented rate in all over the world instead of working for any organisation. Moreover, many big businesses are also supporting them like, financially. However, according to my perspective, there are some drawbacks which cannot be overlooked.
To commence with, there are overabundance points available on this. First and foremost, we have to handle everything in every field by ourselves which create pressure on people sometimes. Furthermore, people prefer to do work hard day and night for establishing their businesses in right direction and they do not give their time to their families and parents. Secondly, they do not get anything like, fixed salary, provident fund, bonus and so on which you can easily get in any job. Additionally, they have to confront all the loss by themselves. To exemplify, according to a survey, it can be manifested more than 58% self employed people do not give time to their families which is not good for children and families.
On the other hand, youngsters want to set up their own businesses or want to be self employed because of freedom. In addition, nobody can bound any rule on them like, dress code, working hours, e.t.c which people have to follow while working in any company and they can easily do whatever they want to do in their life. Another reason could be, everyone knows that business is the well of money through businesses we can generate high profit and be a rich man within a short period. For instance, my father he used to do job on a petrol pump as a salesman but after that he wanted to do something big that is why they established their own business and right now our position is good than past.
On a concluding note, undoubtedly, there are plenty of reasons why self employed is far better than doing job in companies yet, there are demerits also available like, no fixed income, work pressure and so on. Nevertheless, I, personally believe that if We would do hardwork with full of dedication then nobody can defeat us whether it is in job or in any business.
- Some people think that in the modern world getting old is entirely bad Others however think that life of elderly in the modern world is much better than it was in the past Discuss both views and give your opinion 89
- Some people think that new houses should be built in the same style as older houses in the local area Others disagree and say that local authorities should allow people to build houses in the style s of their own choice Discuss both view and give your own 84
- Some people suggest that bringing up children by the whole family including uncles aunts and grandparents is better rather than only by parents Do you agree or disagree with this statement Give your opinion and examples 77
- Some school leavers tend to go travelling or work for a period of time before going to university directly what do you think are the advantages and disadvantages 89
- Some school leavers tend to go travelling or work for a period of time before going to university directly what do you think are the advantages and disadvantages 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, for instance, in addition, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1771.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78648648649 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74138400582 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556756756757 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3831541512 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.066666667 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235065321459 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809972514822 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752785009926 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14890574291 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0347043316282 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.