Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed ,rather than to work for a company or organization .
Why might this be the case?
What could be disadvantages of being self-employed?
In recent times, many people prefer to be self-employed as opposed to being
a worker of a company or organisation. In my opinion, there are several positive
reasons for this trend, and the employees would face with particular problems.
People are interested in being employees, who provide themselves with jobs
when they know its advantages. The primary one is that such employees work on
not only convenient but also comfortable condition , and this is the incentive of
majority workers. For example, the owner of the IT related job can work
everywhere , only connection with the internet and their laptops are enough t
o
work. In addition, the self-employed workers also earn much higher income
compared to others because of damand on them. In other words, most of selfemployed professions consist of online work, and people use a lot online services.
Regarding the drawbacks of the self-employee, the main one would be
connected with health issues. The individuals spend their most time in front of
screen , and this impacts their eye side negatively. It is generally known that living
passive lifestyle cause obesity and it is easy to happen with people who work at
home especially with online workers. A part from that, employees who work for
organisations take pension after their working life , but there is no one who does
it for self-employed workers.
By way of conclusion, people want to provide themselves with a job in order
to recieve much money , although they might have some problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, for example, in addition, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1292.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20967741935 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86581163273 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612903225806 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 20.3892673292 49.4020404114 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 107.666666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 19.0 4.38176352705 434% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281076026316 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104319504671 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111722040174 0.0667982634062 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.088252308522 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114260953258 0.056905535591 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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