In recent years self-employment has been considered by a lot of people to be better option compared to working in a company or organization.In my opinion,there are some factors for that and there are also some drawbacks of that option.
Many people are in the favor of working for themselves due to some reasons.First of all,it helps them to be out of subordinate person.This means that you are free to do things and get rid of companys' rules which are annoying for you.Secondly,nowadays there are so many limited number of job vacancies offered by companies that workers have less possibility of finding a suitable job.What is more,the option gives people better lifestyle,for example,being with their familiy and friends at the time they want.In a short saying,they feel themselves to be in brights colours of life.That is why, plently of people face to personal business.
On the other of the issue,self-reliant workers have a large amount of risk in their personal business.This is because the individuals have lots of problems to deal with on their own,for instanse,these should run company,provide the company with money,take responsibility of management and so on.Another point is that coorporation of working gives company a hand to be ruled effectively as it is cear that working with many has more merits rather than single.In addition, When a person work for a company, he has more obligation for their job compare with the time being own business,as a result the attitude of working is changeable.Therefore,personal job is an double-edged sword.
In conclusion, there are lots of reasons for that many people agree with self-employment,such as limited vacancies,intention to be away from the control of others,good chance of better life.However,the demerits of that are also enough to take into account,for examle,high risks of breaking down personal business,less responsibility.
- Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization.Why might this be the case?What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed? 61
- Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization.Why might this be the case?What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed? 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1597.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34113712375 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.85401552201 2.80592935109 137% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561872909699 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 74.0 20.2975951904 365% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 191.582064662 49.4020404114 388% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 399.25 106.682146367 374% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 74.75 20.7667163134 360% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 40.75 7.06120827912 577% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 38.0 5.01903807615 757% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306817989188 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.196914610342 0.084324248473 234% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0283648211736 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196914610342 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283648211736 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 41.1 13.0946893788 314% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -12.09 50.2224549098 -24% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.44779559118 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 33.3 11.3001002004 295% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.88 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.48 8.58950901804 134% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 31.6 10.1190380762 312% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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