Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
There is no doubt that our world has witnessed a variation of career trend in which more and more people prefer working for their own company to working for another organization or firm. This happens with two main reasons which depend on people's personality and the general career trend. However, this also creates various negative effects to those who are self-employed. This essay will give the analysis of this hot button issue.
It is mostly believed that self-employment is energetically fostered among the young due to not only their talents but also their exposure toward the contemporary start-up trend. To genius people who have been immersing in tons of work and strictly limited with their simple roles in one small department of a company may find themselves more potentially productive in another role and better conditions for their self-development. And self-employment is their solution. In addition, startup has gradually become a world trend, which encourages more and more young self-employed people to strive for their desired businesses. One specific example for this is a large number of the youngsters choosing to operate their startup companies even when they are undergraduate students. Nowadays, with the widespread of startup TV shows such as Shark Tank where many start-up owner can persuade and call for investments for their own firms, it is clear to prove that they have many opportunities to make their dreams come true.
However, people who work for their own business can confront with dozens of difficulties. At first, their business can get a high risk of bankruptcy when they lack of management skills, practical experiences and their project feasibility, Another disadvantage of being self-employed is that the business is in the competition with very large corporations who gain the biggest market share in the same field. These are really challenging to newborn firms and require the owners clear visions, real abilities and patience.
In conclusion, self-employment is really a great opportunity for those who are potentially talented in their characteristics to be able to tackle with a wide range of difficulties existing in every business.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 660, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, really, so, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1847.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33815028902 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05495704356 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575144508671 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.6440399437 49.4020404114 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.928571429 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7142857143 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24409462416 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0919846045671 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051166658753 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155226022005 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0195522306403 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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