Nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide basic and a large number of children play computer games.What are the positive and negative effects of playing computer games?

Computer became the most accessible to every person regardless of age.Moreover, children were accessing to play games on computer.However it has both merits and demerits that effecting on the childrens career.

Firstly,children playing computer games makes them stress free and improves their skills such as technical thinking,problem solving that brings competition between their age groups.

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Average: 2.2 (1 vote)
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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 71, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
...sible to every person regardless of age.Moreover, children were accessing to play games ...
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Line 1, column 131, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...ere accessing to play games on computer.However it has both merits and demerits that ef...
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Line 1, column 131, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ere accessing to play games on computer.However it has both merits and demerits that ef...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hat effecting on the childrens career. Firstly,children playing computer games ...
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Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , children
...ing on the childrens career. Firstly,children playing computer games makes them stres...
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Line 3, column 116, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , problem
... their skills such as technical thinking,problem solving that brings competition between...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, moreover, so, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 41.998997996 14% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 341.0 1615.20841683 21% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 55.0 315.596192385 17% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.2 5.12529762239 121% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.72326981533 4.20363070211 65% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.50093257942 2.80592935109 125% => OK
Unique words: 47.0 176.041082164 27% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.854545454545 0.561755894193 152% => OK
syllable_count: 97.2 506.74238477 19% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 16.0721442886 12% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 14.0 49.4020404114 28% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 170.5 106.682146367 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 23.0 7.06120827912 326% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283429505271 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.216361059493 0.084324248473 257% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574349740056 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216361059493 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574349740056 0.056905535591 101% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.5 13.0946893788 164% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.15 50.2224549098 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.98 12.4159519038 153% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.72 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 78.4519038076 25% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.78957915832 169% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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