Nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide basis and a large number of children play computer games.What are the negative impacts of playing computer games and what can be done to minimize the bad effects?

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Nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide basis and a large number of children play computer games.

What are the negative impacts of playing computer games and what can be done to minimize the bad effects?

Nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide basis and a large number of children play computer games.

What are the negative impacts of playing computer games and what can be done to minimize the bad effects?

Nowadays, almost every person on the planet uses computers on a daily basis while a majority of children spend their time playing computer games. This essay will discuss what are the harmful effects of playing computer games including computer addiction and weakening of eyesight and give solutions to these problems like using protective glasses and balancing time between playing games and extracurricular activities.

Computer addiction is a real problem that has arisen after the increasing popularity of computer games. The main issue that addiction causes is the person cannot detach himself from the activity he is addicted to and enjoy anything else. Because of this these children seldom go outside to engage in outdoor activities and their studies also get affected. All this happens because they are addicted to playing computer games and if they leave this activity it makes them feel miserable. For example, a study done by researchers showed that those children who play computer games are more likely to suffer from poor grades. These children also develop poor eyesight because they stare at the computer screen all day without any break. This over time has an adverse effect on their eyesight. A study done by researchers showed that children who play computer games are more prone to develop poor eyesight than those who play outdoor games.

To prevent this from occurring, children should be told to take breaks from time to time and wear protective computer glasses everytime they are playing games on the computer. To prevent a child from getting addicted to a computer game he should be encouraged to participate in outdoor activities like playing outside with friends. This allows a child to develop other interests and he learns to balance his time between the computer and his other hobbies. A child should also be told to wear computer glasses whenever he uses the computer for a long period as these glasses protect our eyesight from harmful rays from the computer screen that could eventually damage our eyes. For example, a study was conducted by researchers between people who wear eye protection and those who do not. The results showed that those who wore computer glasses had significantly less risk to developing bad eyesight than those who did not.

In conclusion, its safe to say that almost every person uses computers in one way or another in their daily lives and that children are getting increasing involved in playing computer games. This essay discussed the harmful effects these video games have on children's health like addiction and eye weaknesses and gave solutions to this issue that included taking breaks and using computer glasses.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 280, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ime to time and wear protective computer glasses everytime they are playing games...
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Message: Comparison is written "as well 'as'".
Suggestion: as
...to engage in outdoor activities as well like playing outside with friends. This allo...
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Line 9, column 561, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...henever he uses the computer for a long period of time as these glasses protect our eyesight f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2280.0 1615.20841683 141% => OK
No of words: 445.0 315.596192385 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12359550562 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59293186426 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46202723047 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.442696629213 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 707.4 506.74238477 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3543002688 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.666666667 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7222222222 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.94444444444 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34777717285 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132034760381 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0812138169429 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253508375335 0.151304729494 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534194394453 0.056905535591 94% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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