Nowadays,many people have have access to computers and a large number of children enjoy playing video games.
What are advantages and disadvantages of playing video games for children?
At the moment,many people can use computers,more and more young people enjoy spend their time with video games and games popularity is increasing very fast. This essay will look at the positive aspects these games can have and also the negative effects on children.
There are many advantages and disadvantages of enjoy playing video games by children.
Firstlay, nowadays,education is demanding to use smart technologies,computers and the internet. They are help to improve to their knowledge. For example video games is very useful for children to understand about environment, animals and others. In addition,some type of video games improve their ability of solving mathemathical numbers,finding difference and thinking about things. As a result children will be smarter than old ancestors.
However,there also many problems with the popularity increasing of video games. Children spend their much time to play video games and they live in virtual life with heroes of video games. Consequently,they are isolated from society and cannot indentify what is real or unreal. In some countries the quality of education is decreased and they learnt the reasons it. Then they came to the conclusion,children play video games for hours at night. So they could not sleep enough. Of course,this is effects to education of chilren.
In conclusion, parents should control their children's activities in their free time and theybprovide to play suitable video games to their age. I think they should use smart programms to monitor children's activities with computer and smartphones
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, however, if, look, so, then, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, of course, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1332.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48148148148 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30985994002 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559670781893 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.4281235843 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.3529411765 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2941176471 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52941176471 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.433581193664 0.244688304435 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14166950862 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.158432990197 0.0667982634062 237% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.308798868337 0.151304729494 204% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.16908222843 0.056905535591 297% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.91 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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