Studying abroad is popular among the university students as a essential part of their degrees. Students think studying outer country university gives better opportunity to learn more and get better job in future. On the other hand, some of the students also face some problem in learning communicative language and culture. As far as I concerned, I think both side have their own reasons, let us get down to the advantages and disadvantages before we take a side.
Some cases student think that studying in abroad are more beneficial than study in own country. When student are study abroad it gives a great opportunity to learn more what they study. For example, my personal experience to study an Indian university for one semester, on that time I had got better knowledge about GIS and RS. Because their teachers’ qualification and study syllabus are more update and technological .Job security is one of the aspects of study abroad, most of the developing countries are given more privileges of developed country university degree. For example, when a student gets abroad university degree they got better job and salary. Lots of other benefits like learn other language and culture.
On the other hand, some of the student facing lots of problem in study time in abroad. First of all, when student take admission in university they have facing problem in communication, sometime language became more painful things to study. Secondly, cultural difference create problem to adapted new culture. In the case of muslim student they need to pray five time a day but some of the abroad university have not enough facility to pray. Finally, costing is too high that’s why some of the student is not willing to go abroad.
In sum, now a day’s student wants to get masters or PHD degree from abroad university. All those there are some difficulty to get the university degree, but when they get degree lots of benefits and better life waiting for them. That’s why I think studying abroad are more advantages than disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 61, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...opular among the university students as a essential part of their degrees. Studen...
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Line 1, column 203, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...tunity to learn more and get better job in future. On the other hand, some of the student...
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Line 1, column 233, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...etter job in future. On the other hand, some of the students also face some problem in lear...
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Line 3, column 6, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'cases'' or 'case's'?
Suggestion: cases'; case's
...vantages before we take a side. Some cases student think that studying in abroad a...
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Line 3, column 97, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e beneficial than study in own country. When student are study abroad it gives a gre...
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Line 3, column 424, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...llabus are more update and technological .Job security is one of the aspects of st...
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Line 3, column 426, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Job
...abus are more update and technological .Job security is one of the aspects of study...
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Line 5, column 20, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...uage and culture. On the other hand, some of the student facing lots of problem in study...
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Line 5, column 47, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'lots of problems'.
Suggestion: lots of problems
... other hand, some of the student facing lots of problem in study time in abroad. First of all, ...
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Line 5, column 380, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...t they need to pray five time a day but some of the abroad university have not enough facil...
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Line 5, column 489, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ly, costing is too high that's why some of the student is not willing to go abroad. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, for example, i think, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1716.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04705882353 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74932517672 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479411764706 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8186856457 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3333333333 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8888888889 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244031480282 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0946379230291 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055790766766 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165932091412 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034392824121 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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