Nowadays many women are joining the police and military forces.however, some people believe that these jobs are not suitable for women.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In this rampant age of globalization, everyone selects the job according to their interest.Presently, a large number of females are rapidly joining the police and armed force.By contrast, others claim that there are number of jobs which do not suits the women personlity.Here, i would like to address the both sides with my own perception.
There are ample points to endrose my former view. First and foremost, most of the women join army and police in order to earn bread and butter for their family.For instance, multifarious families do not have male member so that women decide to do job in government sector.As a result, they also earn name and fame in the society and every individual give respect to them.However,others have conflicting views.
They deem that girls are expert in domestic household works such as cooking,washing and so on. Therefore they should not join the air force and other related jobs.Hence, this type of jobs not suitable for girls. Moreover, in these jobs women have to live far away from their house which is might impossible for women due to their children.
From my notion, Both the aspects their own significance,but according to my opinion,nowadays women plays a great role in every field and most of the women prefer to join the air force, navy, armed force and so on. Therefore, women can do everything and it is well said by someone "nothing is impossible."
To recapulate, in modern era, gender does not matter in any kind of sector so that women has proved then can work like as a men in every field.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'well', 'for instance', 'kind of', 'such as', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.261589403974 0.247107183377 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.149006622517 0.155533422707 96% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0794701986755 0.0946595960268 84% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0629139072848 0.0501214627716 126% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0430463576159 0.0437548338989 98% => OK
Prepositions: 0.112582781457 0.122226691241 92% => OK
Participles: 0.0198675496689 0.0403226058552 49% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 3.07801492253 2.80594681477 110% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0364238410596 0.0326793684256 111% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0794701986755 0.0861772015684 92% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0165562913907 0.021408717616 77% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00662251655629 0.011925033212 56% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1565.0 1933.35771543 81% => OK
No of words: 265.0 316.048096192 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.90566037736 6.12580529183 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20517956788 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.267924528302 0.374742101984 71% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.184905660377 0.28420135186 65% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.132075471698 0.203846283523 65% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.11320754717 0.137316102897 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07801492253 2.80594681477 110% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.037074148 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581132075472 0.56093040696 104% => OK
Word variations: 60.1061233243 60.7387585426 99% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0891783567 50% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 33.125 20.7743622355 159% => OK
Sentence length SD: 107.645178132 49.517814964 217% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 195.625 127.492653851 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.125 20.7743622355 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.875 0.814263465372 230% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 3.99599198397 501% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 51.6155660377 49.1944974215 105% => OK
Elegance: 1.54545454545 1.69124875643 91% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337003440308 0.332605444948 101% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.120278133578 0.102741220458 117% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0416520258905 0.0668466124924 62% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.66625935373 0.534860350844 125% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.254484536935 0.148594505496 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158586864759 0.134430193775 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064587414315 0.0742795772207 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.260900624097 0.324371583561 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0671461732017 0.0638462369009 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202095851865 0.228012699653 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0716635446288 0.058150111329 123% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.68436873747 46% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 10.4468937876 67% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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