Nowadays, many young people would like to work for themselves rather than applying somewhere for a job. While some believe that being self-employed can be a good change in a more competitive labor market, others fear that there are many risks to be freelancers.
What is your opinion on this issue?
Finding a suitable career is always a noticeable aspect in our increasingly competitive society. Numerous individuals assume that applying to a particular organization is preferable to becoming a freelancer. Conversely, I reckon that having a freelance job offers more pros.
First of all, working for ourselves facilitates us in finding jobs with flexibility. The benefit of being a freelancer is that we have total control over our schedule. For example, before receiving a project from a company, we can consider the deadline and decide whether we have adequate time to receive the job. Moreover, whenever people feel tired and stressed, this job enables them to stop working and quickly do something relaxing or take a break. Additionally, being self-employed, we are free to opt for the workplace such as our home, a coffee shop, or any other location provided that the outcome matches our expectations. Thanks to this, our body obtains much energy and steadfastly accomplishes tasks.
Another equally significant merit is that we are entirely independent in terms of finances. It means the number of projects we are partaking in will be equivalent to the amount of money we attain after finishing them. Furthermore, our finance depends on not only a source but also many others. The evidence is that when we are self-employed, we seek work in different fields to guarantee that we are satisfied with our earnings. Hence, we can access numerous clients, and this enhances our opportunities when having such a network. As a result, we are energetic and enthusiastic about our independent job, which is one of the significant elements to flourish our career.
To conclude, self-employment provides advantageous conditions for individuals in terms of freedom and wages. Because of this unquestionable evidence, the number of youngsters launching their own business has increased dramatically.
- The Covid 19 pandemic has brought many positive changes to the way students learn Do you agree or disagree with this statement Write a paragraph at least 150 words to give your opinion 56
- The difference between the one to one lesson with a private tutor and a language center for people who tend to study foreign languages 56
- Nowadays many young people would like to work for themselves rather than applying somewhere for a job While some believe that being self employed can be a good change in a more competitive labor market others fear that there are many risks to be freelance 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, first, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, for example, i reckon, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1605.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36789297659 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20215207664 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635451505017 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.2690655931 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.4117647059 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5882352941 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.70588235294 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160435175845 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518351461976 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395762769051 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0942096232319 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448406089919 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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