Nowadays, more and more foods are transported from place to place instead of being consumed in their own town. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
These days, there has been a growing trend of shipped foods from one place to another. This present both pros and cos, however, in my opinion, its benefits are much more significant than the drawbacks.
Firstly, one reason why distributing foods to different locations is advantageous is that local people can be offered a greater variety to choose from. For example, Vietnamese people can purchase kiwi fruit imported from foreign country. Furthermore, one further justification which should not be ignored here is that this trend will be created more jobs for local residents. This means that the provincial economy will be accelerated from these. A good case in point would be that there need a great deal of labours for logistics field to move on the goods to another place.
On downside of transporting foods to another location is that it could contribute to air polution. The distribution of foods, by truck, plane or train, will emit a large of compounds which have been dertermined to be hazardous like CO2, for instance. Another drawbrack is important to figure out that the conveyance of foods is that they will be sold at a higher price. It is obvious when compare the price of local fruit with non-local fruit.
In conclusion, although conveyance of foods exerts some adverse aspects, the advantages can justify these. In my point of view, this trend is unavoidable when human’s life more and more full of material.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1202.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00833333333 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70908963799 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620833333333 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.2410311531 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.4615384615 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4615384615 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15384615385 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258950661796 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863563655155 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476886772837 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156563386281 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510340649207 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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