Nowadays more and more people are spending less time at home. Why do you think it happens? What effects does it have on individuals?
In modern times, many people are spending time in their homes. I believe that because of the work schedule. It makes a week bonding between their friends and family members.
To commence with, many people find difficulties to get some time to spend with their family members because of work. Many people are working for long hours to earn more money. They want to buy luxurious things, and to improve their lifestyle. They do shifts and part-time jobs to become busy with their work. For example, in Japan, 60% of people are working extra hours after their job hours because they get two times more salary for working in extra hours. Consequently, they are not able to find time to spend with family.
The main effect on individuals is the bonding between family and friends become weak. They spend much of their time to work. They are not able to find time to talk and eat together. Also, they are unable to understand the mattress at home which sometimes result dispute and misconceptions. They are in trouble to manage their schedule, and the bonding between the children also affect. Children learn several things while they are with their parents. As a consequence, the children are become deprived to gain moral values from them.
In conclusion, although life becomes very busy and people do not have much time, the balance between work and time is necessary to live a comfortable life. People should work in their comfort zone so that they cannot face any troubles.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, so, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1237.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87007874016 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32138283737 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527559055118 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 378.0 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.1925629783 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.7222222222 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1111111111 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.38888888889 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162383265389 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581062718309 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481125968801 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102770896653 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.024193856481 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.37 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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