Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons? What are the effects on society and family life?
In recent years, many young people refuse to become mothers or fathers as soon as older generation did in the past. This come with variety of reasons and contribute to some positive changes in our society and future families.
Firstly, people want to concentrate on their career path in order to build a strong foundation for their kids in the future. This means that in spite of being busy with both earning money and taking care of children at once, they choose to focus on one thing at a time. Thanks to that, their children will be well-prepared before coming to life. Secondly, some people claim that they want to extend their free life to explore the world before being attached to a family. These people usually own an adventurous personality and appreciate an independent life. For example, one of my friends who is working as a tour guide at age 35 said that if she had a child, she would have to change her interesting job to another stable one, which seems so difficult for her at the moment.
This trend of life style will bring some positive effects for our society. Employees will be more productive because there will be no barrier bother them working towards their own targets. Besides, they also have time to take part in many community activities outside the office such as becoming a volunteer teacher or organizing a regular science club. This will lead to the result that after having children, these people not only tent to spend more time to raise their kids but also have more interesting experiences to share with them than the younger one.
In conclusion, people todays choose to have children later in life in order to achieve the best times for both themselves and their future children. Besides, this also contributes some clear benefits to improve our society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79421221865 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41540959961 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588424437299 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9503430369 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.5 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2142857143 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252407790003 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0869946255627 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686223968615 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149443228145 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522747938419 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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