Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons? Is this a negative or positive trend?
In recent years, there has been an enormous number of couples that decide to delay parenthood at their later stages of life. Although this is beneficial to some aspects, I would contend that the drawbacks would be far more significant which will be addressed in this essay.
There are several reasons why parents often choose to procrastinate their giving birth. Firstly, since the labour market is more and more fierce than it did in the past, married couples need to pursue their career paths in order to make a living or even avoid being financially disadvantaged condition later. Obviously, not only does this will save a great deal of time for them but the cost of taking care of their kids. Secondly, parents are more likely to enjoy their life after marrying. In fact, there is almost no time for them to do that if they opt to give birth immediately because there are so many things that need to be considered thoroughly by married couples, namely the tuition fees of entering kindergartens for their children later.
Nevertheless, I personally believe that the advantages would be far more the aforementioned benefits. The primary reason is that parents will have to cope with an enormous number of health risks, such as excessive bleeding in the prenatal and postnatal period after childbirth, as they determine to delay parenthood lately. Another significant one is that a child is an integral part of the family that could remain the happiness among members. According to experts, married couples tend to be isolation by themselves as they gain a handsome salary or higher promotion in the job, which means they will spend much time or even money on other things in lieu of caring each other or childcare after married in a long time, resulting in divorce later.
In conclusion, although the benefits of having children later are undeniable, I am strongly of the opinion that this would be detrimental impacts on couples' life in many cases by aforementioned reasons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1652.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94610778443 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68932948849 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574850299401 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.4240077907 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.666666667 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8333333333 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.91666666667 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242872045502 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0919421468658 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553072312674 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153525066055 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05617393427 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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