Nowadays, more and more people from different cities are spending more time away from their families. What are the possible reasons and the effects on the people themselves and their fami-lies?
More and more people today spend less time with their families due to today's modern society. This greatly affects their relationships with their families. I will discuss its causes and effects in this essay.
To begin with, in today's rapidly developed society, people must work in order to stay up with the times. Many people are overly devoted to their jobs, spending far too much time at work rather than with their families. Rather than spending time with your family, you are preoccupied with meetings and social gatherings; instead of spending weekends with your family, you are preoccupied with meeting deadlines. Moreover, because each family member has a unique bond, they frequently miss out on going out with the family to go out with their friends. As the popular belief these days is that family can get together at any time and friends should have a chance, they place a higher value on social gatherings with friends.
The reason appears to be uncomplicated, but the effects have huge consequences for family relationships. Parents who neglect their children because they are preoccupied with work have a significant impact on their character later in life. They'll have a rebellious attitude and act in ways that astonish their parents. To make their children feel less lonely, many parents give them money or buy expensive toys. Through this, they will adopt a materialistic worldview, asking for whatever they wish and becoming enraged if they do not receive it. Not only that, but failing to communicate and share with one another on a regular basis will lead to arguments and emotional rifts. A debate, for example, occurs when each person believes he is correct and expects the other to understand him, but they are unable to communicate. It is the lack of sharing and understanding that leads to families breaking apart.
In summary, many people do not spend time with their families because their lives are becoming increasingly busy as a result of modern lifestyles. This has a significant impact on family members' emotions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, for example, in summary, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1723.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08259587021 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60909743475 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566371681416 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1913635121 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7222222222 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223446068351 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800267145898 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0873407939927 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178490588083 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0880458999397 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.