Nowadays more people are living by themselves. What are the reasons for this? Will this have a negative or a positive impact on the society?
Lifestyle has undergone dramatic changes over couple of decades. Now some masses are live alone from their parents. Here, i would like to account for both negatives and positives along with reasons behind this trend.
There are manifold behind this phenomenon. First and foremost, in this era people have to migrate in other cities for business, education and job. Therefore they have tendency to live alone and its creat gap among their relationship. Moreover, now folks are busy in this busiest era in this way they have enough time by which they do not spend with their elders. As a result, harmony, intimacy and understanding among family members is curtailing day by day.
Further emphasizing, people spend quality of time with thier gadgets in this way they are live in their separate room as well as gap generation is also biggest reason behind this modern world which creat intimacy.
There are multifarious drawbacks of this trend. Firstly,young children have lack of moral, social and cultural value because of they live far away from their parent. Thus, modern generation is expected to be self centered, less cooperative, obedient and respectful to each other. On the contrary, it has some benefits too.
To commence with, people can learn independent while taking responsibility of their own survival. Thence, they become more responsible, matured and bread winners a part of this, they can take decision yourself without any bounding.
To recapitulate, lifestyle has dramatic changes over couple of decades. Undeniably, its urgent to walk with modernity. However, young children have spend time with their elders because they can learn social, moral, and cultural value.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, as a result, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28888888889 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63218446575 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603703703704 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.17574196 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.3333333333 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248405457317 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075414549562 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075530197366 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129626547188 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686362759935 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.81 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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