Nowadays, more people move away from their friends and families for work. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Now, have many people live far away from their families and friends for job. This essay will examine both sides of the arguments before a reasoned conclusion is drawn.
Admittedly, there are some arguments in favor of people move away from their friends and families. First, everyone when to a certain age always have their job and work according to its choices and each person today also busy with their job, because when economic country development requires quality work so everyone is always busy. For that reason, many people now choose to stay away from friends and families. This life away from everyone,presumably tends add not only to increase takes additional responsibility for its action but also help people be more proactive in terms of time. You have chance doing you like, make plans without having to care about anyone like living close to everyone. Second, stay away from friends and families probably result in a greater supply highly qualified workers, which benefits society in the long run. In fact, it is acknowledged that skilled and knowledgeable human capital is imperative to foster economic growth and technological development in any nations.
Nevertheless, the resultant problems would be far more significant than the minor benefits once live far away from friends and families. First, live far away from everyone is would likely correspond with a psychological with lack of love families and friends. Live alone, lonely only focused job one beside, meaning that you haven’t nobody confide and comfort when you feel helpless in life because you not have friends and families. People choose to live socially isolated just because of work, is it really useful and good for people ?. Second, when you no one beside, also tends don’t want communication including those who are depressed or show no interest in make friends, thereby depressed great burdens for future society and their productivity and potentially wasting time that these people could have psychological stability. It, instead, would be a more society viable option if the people choose suitable lifestyle.
This essay above was discussed both views advantages and disadvantages of both view. In my opinion, communicate and live near everyone is very important, advantages outweigh disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, nevertheless, really, second, so, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1931.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2904109589 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74824411407 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567123287671 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 621.9 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9809657348 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.588235294 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4705882353 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58823529412 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365242254614 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118769049166 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0963308935784 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211607716573 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0728935239418 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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