In this recent time the advancement of technology has enable humans to perform several tasks at their place and an electronic tool such as robot is topping the list in this. Though it has several pros and cons but invention of robot is positive development for society.
On the one hand, importance of robot has been revealed in the world, people in developed countries like China, Japan, Russia and United States of America have been already using this technology since last few decades for doing house hold chores such as cooking ,washing, cleaning, watering plants as well as gaurding homes, whereas other developing nations have shown their interest to adopt this advanced apparatus. Furthermore robots are now being considered as a sense of relief for many people specially for them who get tired due to hectic schedule in this situation they feel that there is something which can assist them in completing their pending work at home.
On the other hand, while looking on detrimental effects of this technology, constant rely on robotic equipment would make people more lethargic which could lead to many serious problems such as obesity as it is said by many doctors that overweight can lead to hypertension and diabetes as well as to gallbladder disease. Secondly, there is always possibilities of errors while performing the tasks as these robots are operated on given command and crash in the system can happen any time which could damage the expensive stuffs. Lastly, in our society only few can afford it due to its high cost.
In conclusion, invention of robot is definitely a positive development for our global community but people need to know its consequences before using this.
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Suggestion: enabled
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Suggestion: ,
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, lastly, look, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, while, as to, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08865248227 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6018245466 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613475177305 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 108.849379879 49.4020404114 220% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 179.375 106.682146367 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.25 20.7667163134 170% => OK
Discourse Markers: 17.0 7.06120827912 241% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196901871754 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0842736569005 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421199436188 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116864314086 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307495236475 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.2 13.0946893788 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.