It is thought by some individuals that sports activities hold a significant position in recent time. However, many other think that it is nothing more than an entertainment activity. In my opinion sport has several other benefits many people do not it just for leisure purpose.
On the one hand, in the current time the advantages of sports has not been hidden from people, they know how it helps to keep our body fit, therefore this trend is being adopted globally even several research agencies and doctors have published their opinion through visual and print media that those who conduct regular exercise they hardly come in clutch of obesity and deadly diseases. moreover many people choose sports as profession, for example, an eminent Indian cricketer Virat Kohli does not only do it for pleasure purpose but for profession. In addition, sports activities can give name and fame to those who do it with full passion because their hard work could give them opportunity to represent the national team, along with that plyers can get several chance to explore the various countries.
On the other hand, in this moribund city life people are entangled in various responsibilities, due to that lots of people have constrains of time to adopt sport in their regular routine. But whenever they get spare time to they head towards the most loving sports activity. however, some times unavailability of resources stop them to play their favourite game for example, one who like to do mount climbing repeatedly but living in plain landscape would make it impossible for him or her so they may have just one option left that whenever they will visit to particular site they perform it.
To conclude, sport has abundant of merits, it is not just leisure activity for society, however, it leads people to live healthy life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Moreover
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Suggestion: moreover,
... clutch of obesity and deadly diseases. moreover many people choose sports as profession...
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Suggestion: several chances
...al team, along with that plyers can get several chance to explore the various countries. ...
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Suggestion: However
...owards the most loving sports activity. however, some times unavailability of resources...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'times'' or 'time's'?
Suggestion: times'; time's
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion:
... activity for society, however, it leads people to live healthy life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53130259839 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607843137255 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.467679583 49.4020404114 205% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 153.0 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.6 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238872406979 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111563319559 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632081225151 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174417482433 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.083751855745 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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