Nowadays most people are not as fit and active, as they were in the past.what are the main causes of this situation? Suggest some possible solution.
Statistical studies hold by experts, the world over, have revealed that a great deal of people are not fit and inactive, as they were back them. Perhaps, they can be attributed to a range of causes, on the contrary the question arises, does it have a number of fix? Let's delve it deeper.
Needless to say, this ugly growth has been driven by countless factors and the foremost one is people have the sedentary lifestyle, and they prefer to work on machine, for which they have become no work out and pay no attention on own body. Coupled with it, junk food fuel to fire this implies, everyone's have the poor eating habits. Because, they do not like to prepare homemade. Instead, they prefer to eat junk food, reason being, it is easily available in the market for example, burger, pizza, spring rolls, mo mos are in the near future.
Having said that, it orders to get it fixed, a number of endeavours can be made at least. The most effective measure could be the inclusion of regimes. It is an onus on the regimes to prevail enlightenment that is possible via diverse channels ranging from social to print to audio usual. Apart from it, seminars or webinars can be held to know the clear benefits of healthy lifestyle along with it individuals need to do their bit These means should take part in daily activities. Also, it is admitted that, everyone's life has hectic schedule, but they need to prepare home made food it is healthy and hygienic.
To cut a long story short, it does not seem sedentary life and no attention own body irrational to wrap up saying that through and drove their undefinable growth, nevertheless the government and people ought to go hand in hand to iron this problem out.
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Message: Did you mean 'getting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'order' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: getting
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, nevertheless, so, apart from, at least, for example, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.625 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41689252137 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621710526316 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.3710031913 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.153846154 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3846153846 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125187956856 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0404604981606 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354736338013 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0716300713546 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305119274734 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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