Nowadays most people believe individuals cannot do something to improve the environment, but Governments and large companies can make a difference.
To what extent do you agree with this statement?
People may claim that ordinary people do not have any responsibility with environmental problems, and this issue should be taken seriously by only the government and big enterprises. In my opinion, I completely disagree with this idea. I believe that each individual who lives on the Earth should be in charge of the health of Mother Nature.
First of all, the government can not always follow their citizens everywhere to remind them about environmental responsibilities. To do that kind of work is nearly impossible, because this may cost too much money and require too many workers. The budget and the human resources are limited, if the government focuses too much on the environment, there will not be enough resources to solve other social issues anymore. All the government can do is to impose some laws and force their citizens to obey so that they do not harm the environment.
Secondly, ordinary people play a vital role in the improvement of the environment. Even if the government enforces the rules in order to protect the environment, it is meaningless if their citizens do not comply. Moreover, the power of the majority cannot be ignored. For example, if there is a factory discharging waste illegally and causing pollution for that area, residents who live in that place can join hands and sue the company. One individual may not be successful, but many individuals can really get the attention of the government and successfully bring back the fresh environment of where they live.
The awareness of the mass people, their spontaneous and active participation and contribution can improve the environment and the government and large companies can take some steps to inspire them even more.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, for example, kind of, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09219858156 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99604051032 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567375886525 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.466836757 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.461538462 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6923076923 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269280292724 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0886576158892 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049718799544 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161771272169 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0175603504949 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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