In recent years, business organizations have switched over from the traditional method to the electronic method of selling goods. Its benefits are much more significant than the detrimental impacts.
On the bright side, there is an irrefutable fact that online shopping is exceedingly convenient. Companies display the whole range of products to attract customers with different tastes and needs. Websites provide the relevant information including the finish, features and price. This enables the buyers to have access to a much wider range of choices from a variety of models on display. In addition, customers do not have to stand in a queue in cash counter to pay for products that have been purchased. People can shop from their home or workplace and do not have to spend time travelling by entering the keyword and using search engines.
On the dark side, purchasing items via the Internet does have many limitations. To start with, customers lack touch and feel of merchandise, 'trying before buying' is not possible. The buyers have to buy a product without seeing actually how it looks like. The electronic images are sometimes misleading. The color, appearance in real may not match the image. Besides, though the duration of selecting, buying and paying may not take more than 15 minutes, the delivery to the customer's doorstep takes about 1-3 weeks. This frustrates people and prevents them from shopping online.
In conclusion, the disadvantages of e-commerce trends are overshadowed by the benefits resulting from modern technology.
- Nowadays online shopping becomes more popular than in store shopping Is it a positive or a negative development Give your reasons and examples 56
- Nowadays online shopping becomes more popular than in store shopping Is it a positive or a negative development Give your reasons and examples 56
- Nowadays online shopping becomes more popular than in store shopping Is it a positive or a negative development Give your reasons and examples 56
- Nowadays online shopping becomes more popular than in store shopping Is it a positive or a negative development Give your reasons and examples 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
in recent years, business organizations ha...
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Line 5, column 304, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...tronic images are sometimes misleading. The color, appearance in real may not match...
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Line 5, column 475, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'customers'' or 'customer's'?
Suggestion: customers'; customer's
...re than 15 minutes, the delivery to the customers doorstep takes about 1-3 weeks. This fr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, if, look, may, so, in addition, in conclusion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1309.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2995951417 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80357283706 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63967611336 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.0642541068 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.8125 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4375 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9375 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0860268477947 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0274817759944 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437400508367 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0438610167428 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258399024081 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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