In current scenario, online shopping is considered to be more popular and beneficial as computer to the market shopping. Numerous people consider it to more convenient whereas masses believe it to be a fallacious idea. This is my strong conviction that online shopping has proved to be great privilege and positive development for the present generation as it plays an indispensable role in preservation of time and money.
In this rapid moving and scientific era, time management can be considered a significant aspect. Nowadays, more people believe online shopping is more convenient as compared to the store purchasing. Firstly, online shopping grants more comfortable access to the customers as they assess it rather difficult to find adequate time to go for shopping to the available markets. For instance, online stores like Amazon, Snapdeal and flip kart offers a comprehensive and wide range of products. Comprehensibly, e-shopping creates excessive opportunities for the customers to make the suitable choice. Moreover, customers find immense satisfaction due to the heavy discounts offered online.
Elaborating my perspective further, maximum people favor online shopping as it offers a remarkable opportunity to the customers to exchange or return their product in case of any discrepancies. Besides, e shopping offers full money back guarantee on product return that is probably not available in the markets. In addition to this, online shopping also preserves the customers from travelling and parking hazards. Rather, it becomes inconvenient for people to find time for shopping due to their hectic business commitments and responsibilities.
To recapitulate, most people are interested to purchase online as it is considered to be more convenient. Moreover, e-shopping provides favorable opportunities to the customers to make the choice of any particular product. Besides, it helps to save time and money.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 547, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...iness commitments and responsibilities. To recapitulate, most people are interes...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, whereas, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1635.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59931506849 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21036939689 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537671232877 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.372370944 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.1875 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1875 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269582951303 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952212713765 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718399507602 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172801670689 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043034803403 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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