Nowadays online shopping is extremely popular. Discuss the impact of it on environment and on people who lost their job because of it.
Impact of globalization has brought tremendous change in globe. As well as owing to advancements in technology modern individuals prefer to purchase various things which they require through e-commerce. Owing to this, there is an adverse and somewhat beneficial effect on our surroundings. Additionally, the factor of unemployment can be seen. As a result of above discussed issue among many masses. To my mind, abundant reasons are there that are responsible which I will substantiate in forthcoming paragraphs.
To commence with, increasing pollution is considered one of the leading cause of online shopping because the process of wrapping includes more plastic material, which is found with a profound impact on atmosphere. Since the non-biodegradable property of plastic insist users to throw it in ocean or rivers. Due to it, marine life is affected negatively. for example, predominantly water pollution is on the rise in India, as mortals who belong to today's scenario tend to buy things online and for over-packaging to keep secure their products, sellers cover them with wraps of plastic. As a consequence, it leads to exploitation of water resources. Although the level of pollution is fell down in case of vehicles.Having said that, contamination of water is analysed a paramount negative effect of digital shopping.
Apart from profound impact on atmosphere, local workers includes local market shopkeepers influenced badly by being unemployed. It can be noticed that when customers put their hands on needed material through online shopping they ignore the prominence of creativeness of a myriad of exhibitors who make materials such as handicrafts namely earthen pottery. Therefore, earning livelihood might be the biggest constraint for illiterate working-people. This can be illustrated by demolishing population of potters in today's society solely the impact of shopping by internet. Consequently, it is difficult for illiterate people to make their bread and butter.
To conclude, despite having merely the beneficial impact of online shopping on the grounds of pollution, created by transportation, that said increasing water pollution is overshadowed above discussed matter. Additionally, in future it seems that many workers would lost their positions; including handicraft ones.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, so, then, therefore, well, apart from, for example, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1963.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.6408045977 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27436318804 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612068965517 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 615.6 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.7503578496 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.315789474 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3157894737 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63157894737 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196142887919 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.045363578898 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484198260989 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110988588989 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494661654333 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.2 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 78.4519038076 159% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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