Nowadays, people are spending more time away from their homes, because they spend longer in their workplace. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.
It is thought by some people that these days most employees work at offices for many hours as compared to their homes. This trend has both benefits and drawback which will be discussed in the following paragraph.
On the one hand, there are many reasons why some people believe that employees gain more beneficial by working at the workplace. Firstly, it increases their chances of faster growth as compared to other colleagues. Spending hours for solving documents for company would help them overcome their professional deficiencies as well as adding valuable knowledge for their careers. The outcome of this is raising sale figures and potential customers for company so employees are not only getting promotions faster but aslo earning great rewards for yourself for these efforts. Secontly, working at offices, workers easily stay focus on their projects as they do not suffer from children's noises and there is no household interruption.
One the other hand, an individual has to face various issues when they spent more time at the workplace. Despite achieving better results at office, employees have no chance to spend important moment with their family due to shortage of time. Consequently, worker get disconnected from their family and friends due to the pressure of completing the task assigned. Futhermore, people who focus only on work have no time for doing exercise and improving mental health which lead to get dangerous health problems related to diabetes, high blood pressure. My Mother is a good of case in point. She is passionate about her work and often stays up late so she get stressed easily and uncomfortable with people.
In conclusion, while there are some benefits of spending long hours in the workplace, it can also lead to increased stress and loss of connection with the community
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 655, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gets'.
Suggestion: gets
...her work and often stays up late so she get stressed easily and uncomfortable with ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, so, well, while, as to, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13131313131 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65512927758 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612794612795 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9106168547 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.857142857 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2142857143 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202064756059 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672499537581 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467755354617 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114058298022 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422646099045 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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