Nowadays, people do not feel safe either at home or when they are out.
What are causes?
What are solutions?
People currently feel unsafe either at home or go out. This problem is caused by
many factors and my essay below will analyze both causes and feasible solutions
to this issue.
There are various reasons lead to this problem but the most serious is the high
level of pollution. Due to climate change that is happening all around the world ,
people might face the danger of natural disaster whenever they stay at home. For
instance, in Japan, tsunamis, earthquakes occur every year. After each events,
there are many people are killed. In addition, people will face to the fear of being
robbed or murdered any time on the streets. Crime rates are mentioned on TVs
or magazines increasing everyday and people will feel unsafe when they are going
out.
There are two mains remedies to this problem. First and foremost, it would be to
develop new and modern technologies that can help minimize or prevent the
damages of natural disasters. Additionally, it is necessary to reduce the crime
rates on the streets by punishing them with longer prison or heavily penalty fees.
Taking everything to an account, there are many reasons why people usually do
not have feeling of safety either at home or going out and some necessary
remedies to solve this problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 81, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e that is happening all around the world , people might face the danger of natura...
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Line 11, column 25, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ntioned on TVs or magazines increasing everyday and people will feel unsafe when they a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1070.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 214.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36955632718 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635514018692 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 334.8 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.6855790412 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1666666667 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8333333333 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 7.06120827912 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 16.0 4.38176352705 365% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261568766437 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868882340948 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10333268715 0.0667982634062 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0730001429381 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101062236455 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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