Nowadays, people have little awareness of the importance of the natural
world. What are the reasons and how can people learn more about the
natural world?
In modern times, the awareness of people about the essence of the natural world’s impact on their life is low. This essay will examine the main causes and possible solutions to this issue.
The two principal causes of lacking knowledge about the natural world of people are the absence of education about the importance of the environment, and the awareness of humans about protecting nature is restricted. For instance, people are not educated on how the environment affects their life, and how to prevent harmful effects on the nature when they were small. This is the reason why people do not concern about the significance of the environment. Besides, humans do not take our understanding even further by searching news, and the problem which the natural world facing up because of global warming, and climate change on the internet. Thus, people do not any knowledge about the important environment in their lives.
Some appropriate solutions for this issue are educating the children on how the nature plays a vital role in their life and organizing some movements which help to protect the environment and raise awareness of people about the natural world. At school, teachers should teach their students about sorting the garbages, the impact of pollution, saving electricity and clean water, and the benefits of protecting the environment. Moreover, people should take part in the environmental movements at the weekend celebrated by the local authority.
In conclusion, the knowledge of humans about the natural world is restricted because lacking education and the awareness of people about the environment. However, some solutions such as teaching children to raise awareness about the nature and celebrating some environmental movements.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, moreover, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38267148014 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81181321903 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469314079422 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9821016205 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.25 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0833333333 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.39135363379 0.244688304435 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170102575884 0.084324248473 202% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11530591759 0.0667982634062 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.267750138953 0.151304729494 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0685352892423 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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