As all people know social networking sites and apps are becoming extensive widely around the world. This means , technology is in development with the human. People are able to utiize these kinds of apps in several circumstances such as finding info , chatting online or group conversation. Some people think these types of activites are good enough to make friends and to know each other. However, to others perpective , face to face conversation better to know people each other together with feeling and emotions. Of course, it is a matter of discussion to opine a relevant point.
On the one hand , people are being able to use more and more apps to make friends or follows in the 21th century as I mentioned. Surely, it might as well be one of the best way to conversate even though these activities are able to isolate people from the others. they tend to find some difficult or complicated information while asking them from online friends . It can make people more clever than others who do not tend to utilize any apps at all, Moreover, Helpfullness can play an unlimited role among humans . For instance, when a person is in trouble for a particular situation, his or her friends are almost ready to help him or her solve the main issue . That is one of additional and positive aspect of making new friend via staying online.
On the other hand , even though there are various possibilities to tell about advantages of make-friends , it may well be possible to demonstrate the drawbacks of it, For example, no one is able to define and feel any feeling and emotions as long as possible because there is no feeling machine that has ever been invented so far, Therefore, it makes finding online friends minus . One more important thing is due to the love . people do not tend to love any one as well as their online close friends. So that, I would opine that face to face conversation is extremely well enough to make new, genius, clever, smart and generuous person in the entire world.
in conclusion, friends ought to play an initial role in human life . It does not matter to find them in online or real life. The most important thing is how to behave them, how to love them , how to broaden the friendship among them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, of course, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1834.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 392.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67857142857 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55664198294 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52806122449 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 591.3 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.0870871623 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5263157895 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6315789474 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73684210526 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248560931198 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0738607680263 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685676416497 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1441675119 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110474699621 0.056905535591 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.